Wednesday, January 26, 2011

hw 33

Juan said...
This piece was very intriguing to read. This hw assignment made me think of illness and dying through a different lens. "The most nightmarish thing about our culture's practices around illness & dying is how the big insurance companies care more about benefiting themselves more than they do helping the ill and saving peoples lives. This made me think, How could this possibly be changed and come up with a few ways. This reminded me of how bad our system works and how it may not get better.
kane said...
johnny i liked your writing. It's sort and it gets to the point. The line that really stands out, "What i might address differently is why all the doctors seem like they have no say on the unjust practices that are going on in our country.This made me realize that maybe our country really is corrupt and that there is some bad things going on that the govrenment doesnt want us to now about
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For Arden
          The depth of your work was very good. You put alot of depth into it. The line that really stood out to me was when you said, "Lets change the focus of our attention from trying to heal those who are sick to trying to prevent people from getting sick in the first place." This is very true and stood out to me because instead of having so much advertisements for going and eating at Mc. Donalds the govt should be telling us to stay healthy and actually promote this way more than they do. This also made me realize that the way the govt. is running things doesn't seem to be helping us stay healthy.
For Shariff
            You put alot of depth into your piece. I could tell that you took this course very seriously and put alot of effort into this piece. The line that stood out to me was when you said, " I feel that Preventative medicine is something not taken seriously enough in today's culture, we talk about being healthy and eating well but how many of us actually do that? First i would like to say that this is probably very true for most. Alot of people probably aren't as fit and as healthy as they should be.Which made me realize that our culture has probably changed over the years.

Friday, January 21, 2011

HW 32 - Thoughts following illness & dying unit

        The most nightmarish thing about our culture's practices around illness & dying is how the big insurance companies care more about benefiting themselves more than they do helping the ill and saving peoples lives. What i might address differently is why all the doctors seem like they have no say on the unjust practices that are going on in our country. And maybe do some research where the doctors do go against what the big insurance companies want and do what they feel is write despite all the money the hospital might be losing. Dominant social practices around illness & dying connect to DSP around food in our culture because in both these pactices there are corrupt ways of doing things just so the boss's could save more money. Also these two are connected because the people in charge try to do the least amount of work possible while the price stays the same.

Sunday, January 16, 2011

HW 30- Illness & Dying- Culminating Experimental Project

         There are many Aspects of the dominant social practices around illness & dying that few people look into. Practices such as Giving us pain killers so that when the segeon's perform the operation on the patient's body, the pill would have already taken it's course causing the body to have bein reacting differently resulting in the patient not feeling pain. Or how the big insurance companies really care about themselves and only do things to benefit the big insurance companies and to ensure that the ill people get less health care. However there is another aspect of the dominant social practices around illness & dying that even less people look into, such as looking into other countries health care. In countries such as Canada, France, and England where they have a socialist health care system. Now one might find themselvs asking themselves, "But what flaws could these countries possibly have." Well in the Movie Sicko by Michael Moore, he did a great job of explaining there health care system too and how even though there is no such thing as a "perfect health care system" it did show how those other countries have way better health care systems then us and have way better method of doing things than us. 
        The first piece of research I got was by watching the movie sicko by Michael Moore. In this movie something he did was he wanted to compare our health insurance methods to other countries health insurance methods. He went to Canada, France, and England to do this and found that there methods of doing things is very different to our ways of doing things. For example while talking to the people in those countries they told Michael Moore how if they got ill  and couldn't go to work because they were still ill they would still get paid. Anothere example would be how in those other countries the doctors will go to your house and treat you at your house if you can't go over to the hospital. However the most shocking thing that stood out to me was that doctors in Canada, France, and England get paid more for telling people there patients in the U.S only try to do what is needed with the least amount of time possible.
        I have wondered can there be a perfect health care system in the United States. Michael Moore answered my question, when he said that "it is impossible to have a Perfect health care system," However Everyone is entitled to health care. Now even though this is true the down side is the wait may be ridiculously long to actually be seen by a doctor and get the medical attention needed (http://healthcare.procon.org/). Now Britian's health care system has a main principle of the British health care system, being that, "there should be a free, comprehensive health service for everyone according to need, regardless of their income." (http://neamh.cns.uni.edu/MedInfo/bhs.html). 
         While i was talking to my grandmother and asking here questions about illness and dying. I found myself asking her a very deep question. I asked her, "was there a time where the doctors were unjust and didn't seem to care about your medical problem." She then responded by saying yes i have and she then told me how when she was in her mid 30's she didn't have health insureance and because of that everyone that worked in that hospital didn't seem to care about her or her medical problem. She told me how she had to wait about 3-5 hours just to get medical help. She then told me how when she finally did get called to get medical help the doctors didn't really seem to want to help her. And how the doctor seemed as if he wanted to move on to the next paitent and didn't really answer her questions thouroughly or thoughtfully enough.
(http://www.hospitalcomplaint.com/).
         This is clearly a violation of everyone being treated the same while being saught medical attention. This makes me very mad however this is just the tip of the iceberg because this must happen to alot of patients without health insurance. "Back in 2006, The Wall Street Journal told another such story: that of a young woman named Monique White, who failed to get regular care for lupus because she lacked insurance. Then, one night, “as skin lesions spread over her body and her stomach swelled, she couldn’t sleep.”(http://www.nytimes.com/2008/04/11/opinion/11krugman.html)  This pice of evidence shows that my grandmother wasn't the only one that has to deal with being treated unequally because they didn have health insurance. This makes me think, will the United States health care change and become as good as other countries health care such as britain or france. Even though i am not sure it's safe to say by the way things are going that the health care of the United States will not change for a while.
        The pieces of evidence i found that are listed above show that the health care of the United States is not similar to that of Canada, France, or England. My granmother has visited France before and unfortuanantly she was telling me how she got sick there and had to go to the hospital. She told me that unlike here the medical care was superb and they treated her really good and answered any questions she had very thoroughly and thoughtfully. After telling me this I then asked my grandmother, how does the health care system of France compares to the health care system of the United States. She then responded by saying that it didn't and how she doesn't think the United States health care will ever compare to that of Frances. I then asked, why and she said because the doctors of France seem to actually care about you and you are the patient meaning that you are their 1st priority. 
           So i was correct when  I said that The United States health care system is not as good as  Canada, France, or England. However I was also right when I said that there is no such thing as a perfect health  care system. Thus proving that those countries really are reliable and you can count on the medical health care in those countries not like thie curropt medical system we have here in the United States. 

Saturday, January 8, 2011

HW 29- Reading and noting basic materials

        Everybody gets sick at some point of their lives.Now it may be true to alot of people that we spend the most time in the hospitals when we are really close to dying and when we are really sick.However there are many times when we go to the hospital throughout our lives. When i was a about 10 or 11 i had surgery on my arm because i had broke it when i fell  off of a bike that i was riding. Even though i remember waiting for lii 3-4 hours once it was my turn to get medical help the operation went smoothly and didnt take as long as i thought it would. I saw people there  that were in the hospital before me but i guess since i had good health care it came to my advantage and i didnt wait as long as other people. This made me realize that every single person will have to go to the hospital alot of times because every one gets sick and everyone dies. However just because everyne gets sick that doesn't mean that every one will go through the same process.
        It's sad to say but, the reality is that everyone will die and there is no escaping it. However its safe to say that not every one is going to die the same way because there is so many ways to die in this world. In Death and hospital culture it says, "Today, more Americans die in hospitals then anywhere else, and the most frequent response to critical illness there is to try to stave off with the most sophisticated technological means available." (Death and Hospital Culture, 25) This is very sad to know because this shows how alot of people actually do go to a hospital when there time is about to come and die there. However just because this is said in that quote that doens't mean that dying in the hospital is the only way to die.Because in the book i read, "Tuesdays with morrie" Morrie(The main character who was very ill and found out that he only had a few months left before he died) died at home and was in his bed. So im not saying that one is better than the other but its safe to say that where you die will definantly affect that persons experience of dying.For example when you are left to die at home yu seem to have more freedom and anybody can visit you at anytime.However when you are left to die in the hospital the doctors have rules as to what times people can visit you and that person will probably have to sign a whole bunch of things. 
        In the Movie sicko the narrator talks about how so many people in the United states have no health insurance. This is a very sad reality because unlike the other countries such as canada and britain where they have amazingly good health insurance, the health care the united states will only help us when the big insurance companies are recieving money also. However having health insurance in the U.S will have its perks. For example you probably will pay less for treatment and could even get the treatment for free. But like alot of people in the U.S, if you dont have health insurance you will probably be charged a huge sum of money for a little treatment. And the the wait and procedure to get the treatment may be brutal. To make matters worse later on in the Movie sicko it talked about how this one doctor declined a patient health care when they really needed it and because of this, that person died. This really fustrates me because it proves how all the big insurance companies care about is money and they dont even care about us. They would put money over our health care.

Monday, January 3, 2011

HW 28 - Comments 2

        For Sharif, your most beautiful line was in the final pharagraph.The way that you connected with Nadia is very interesting. It is as if with every question you asked you getting closer and closer with her. What really stood out to me was how you connected the way Nadia was acting to the way Morrie from the book "Tuesdays with morrie" was acting. The quote  "i realized that nadia who once moved her hands around as she would tell me stories no longer does that (similar to Morrie in Tuesdays with Morrie)." Made me realize that you noticed every little detail about nadia and thus by doing that you were able to connect this to Morrie.
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        For Arden, That whole piece was really good and you put so much depth into your work.  What really stood out to me is how your great grandmother is 96 year old and still in breathing. The quote, "I partially screamed when I told her about school, my unit about dying. Remembering what my dad had said I tried to change the subject, but I found that she did not mind talking about it." Also stood out to me because your grandmother was so open and was willing to answer alot of questions about illness and dying. This made me realize that there are people in this world that except dying and dont make it a negative experience.